Lord Anzius

Ahem... Put the thing in the beginning... into the last chapter... not this. So let's start. In the next 5 minuets I was out of the plane trying to understand ...

I'm taken... You used me as a characther. Why thank you *takes a bow* And Olli as well. Well here is my critt. “Go go go,” a marine whispered, as ...

WOW:.... The witch could kill a god........ How is that even possible. Well anywayz. Wel truly was evil, and Will seemed quite happy to be dead also Molly didn't seem ...

*Sniff* I LOVED IT..... It has emotion. And it is not booring. I liked it truly. The start though was a bit confusing. Try working on it a little. LORD ...

HMMM let me see.. PUNCTUATION !! HOW CAN YOU ALWAYS FORGET THAT.... JEzus kay but it rhymes well that's what i like but I didn't get this part: Got to ...

OKAY dude....... SOME PUNCTUATION.... like periods and comas: . and , You like onlu put ! and ? But the song is good.... It rhymes enough although it could be ...

Strunk me, and sunk. Your best poem... so far :wink: I liked It... I tried also reading it bottom to top, it worked like that as well. Of course there ...

UUUUUH... something new. YAY Okay great beginning... I can't find anything to nagg about... but give me time =P Very well writen. Name???? Hmmm. Maybe The Carracoul ***********************************

Uuuh Wel is evil. Okay this was your most confusing story (chapter) ever. I got confused. but it was good any wayz. I can't really complain. Liked it. keep it ...

GREAT A WARHAMMER STORY.... YAY We were commanded by Sgt. Leo. As soon we got to the city on top of the mountain. It was quite, too quite… their was ...

Robert..... :shock: I didn't know you knew how to write songs :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: Dude that song rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. I could find some grammar mistakes.. so check the spellings. Also

ok if you don't have to present it... aah. But anywayz. A piece of advise: My old English teacher if he would have seen this he would have given you ...

Artemis Fowl by Eion Colfer (The beginning was too confusing) NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! DO NOT SAY THAT:::::::: I must say...... ANY DRAGO LANCE and that other thing that Realm somet

It is. They both go like this: Young farm boy(Luke/Eragon) lives with his uncle and doesn't know much about his parents. One day, while talking to an old man from ...

So, since one legend is false,” Will said, desperate for information. “who am I in your legends?” “You are Wel, god of power. People call you evil.” Fatina said. Will ...